your eyes shine bright beautiful in the light your brightness your glow brings me happiness and joy, your eyes are blue pretty as you and that's why i like you because of the colors of gar view.
You don't seem to understand what a rhyme scheme is. I taught it several times and showed you as well. This poem was to be written using an abab cdcd rhyme scheme. In the first stanza, the 1st and 3rd lines should rhyme, and the 2nd and 4th lines should rhyme. This pattern is repeated in the second stanza.
There was supposed to be personification and onomatopoeia in the poem, but you don't have either.
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You don't seem to understand what a rhyme scheme is. I taught it several times and showed you as well. This poem was to be written using an abab cdcd rhyme scheme. In the first stanza, the 1st and 3rd lines should rhyme, and the 2nd and 4th lines should rhyme. This pattern is repeated in the second stanza.
There was supposed to be personification and onomatopoeia in the poem, but you don't have either.
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